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'Gibbs' sat down at his desk, and Gibbs crept towards him. He was right behind the fake and placed the barrel right at the base of the imposter's neck, carefully hiding himself directly behind the not-Gibbs.
That 'Gibbs' looked up instantly when he felt the barrel against his neck.
"You're sitting in my desk," Gibbs growled.
"Boss? You OK?" Tony asked, looking at the imposter. Gibbs felt a knife twist in his gut. His protege, his trusted senior field agent--! How could Tony not recognize him? He was going to get a head whack for that. And maybe a year's worth of paperwork.
"You drop it," came a sharp voice, and the real Gibbs looked up to see a gun pointed at him.
"Ziva," 'Gibbs' said, the relief in his voice obvious.
"Get up," the Mossadi barked to the other Gibbs.
The real Gibbs glared at her. "Who are you?"
"There are TWO of you?" Tony exclaimed, shocked. "Boss?"
"This is like a nightmare," McGee muttered, wide-eyed, and both Gibbs looked at him. "Uh, not, you know. Not really like that. Not that it's a nightmare that there are two of you. I just mean - "
"This your twin?" Ziva David asked 'Gibbs.'
"Two Gibbs?" Ducky exclaimed. "Jethro, what is the meaning of this? I thought you were an only child!"
"I AM an only child," both Gibbs grumbled. "I don't know how many times I have to say it and no one believes me. They keep speculating about whether I have brothers or sisters. I AM AN ONLY CHILD."
"OoooooK. So what about...this?" Tony waved at them.
Suddenly there was a sharp metal CHUNK, and everyone looked up as five agents rappelled onto the bullpen floor from MTAC.
"Don't think about it, sweetheart," Nikkinor growled, looking at Tony and pointing her gun at him.
"Drop it," Mindy whispered viciously from behind the Mossad agent, and David slowly lowered her gun.
"Wait a minute," Chickbay suddenly said, eyeing the two Gibbs. "How are we going to tell them apart?"
"I thought you two would each want a Gibbs," Sundance kidded.
"I get the real one," Chickbay and Sugcat each called.
"Maybe this isn't going to work," Sugcat mumbled.
Mindy wrestled the two Gibbs side by side. "No!" She pointed her gun at both of them. "What are you doing here?"
"I work here," both replied.
"Well, we told ONE of you to stay put and let us take care of it!" Mindy shouted. When both Gibbs glared at her, she threw up her hands. "How do I make the imposter disappear if I don't know which one it is?"
"Don't know," Sammie commented, making a mysterious last-minute entrance to rejoin her teammates.
"Where were you?" Nikkinor asked.
"Taking care of business," Sammie replied, pulling a bobby pin from her mouth and sticking it back into her bun.
"I can help." Director Morrow stepped forward just then. He looked at both Gibbs, an amused little smirk on his face. "It wouldn't be that difficult." After another amused look at both Gibbs, who looked at him in consternation, the director called calmly, "Agent Todd!"
There were shocked looks as the petite brunette appeared, alive and well, striding into the bullpen in her navy blue jeans, white cream top, and a leather blazer, looking lethal with the gun clearly visible on her hip.
"Kate?" Abby whispered, her eyes lighting up at her old friend, alive. "Kate!"
She smiled at her. "I have business to take care of first, Abby. Then we can make those spa plans." She winked.
Both Gibbs stared at her, the inscrutable masks over their faces, their mouths partly open. Getting no visible reaction, Morrow nodded to Sundance, who pulled out her Sig Sauer, held it up, and shot Kate in the forehead.
"HOLD ON JUST ONE MINUTE." Sammie cringed at the glare and held up her hands to protect herself. "I SHOT Kate?" Sweet little Sundance screamed. "What is wrong with you!"
"Do we have to edit this, Sammie?" Mindy said chastisingly.
"I knew she shouldn't have stopped her medication," Nikkinor moaned.
"Kate!" came several screams, Tony standing there, wide-eyed and stunned as he watched his close friend fall backwards onto the floor for the second time in a matter of days. Abby and Ducky stood in shock as McGee flinched, and even Ziva looked horrified.
Gibbs stared, shocked horror all over his face, and instantly his gun was trained on Sundance. "I will kill you," he whispered, the hoarseness of his voice making it nearly inaudible, his wide, ice blue eyes full of pain. "I will tear you limb from limb until - "
'Gibbs' picked up the phone and dialed. "This is awesome! Kate's dead, so now that Little Miss Tighty Twisty Pants is gone, I can party! Hey Jen? I know you're my superior, but want to meet me at my place tonight? ... I don't know, what do you want to work on?" he leered. "I say - "
From above, a shot came across the bullpen from MTAC and 'Gibbs' fell backward into his chair. They looked up to see a steely look on DC's face. "I would have settled for just slapping him upside the head for being a weenie, but this works, too," DC grinned.
"That was the imposter for sure," Morrow muttered. "Gibbs doesn't say more than three words a day."
The real Gibbs was still standing at his desk, looking bewildered as he looked between DC and the imposter. "You shot me!"
"There's his quota of words for the day," Sugcat giggled.
Sugcat crossed over to the 'Gibbs,' then lifted the shirt in the back. She pointed. "There we go. Just like Nurse Emma and the others suspected. Robot with human skin. Looks so real, built in the '50s, just like MW said."
"Like 'The Terminator'?" Tony gasped.
All seven agents turned to him. "Do you ever read a book?" They chorused.
"Sound just like Kate," Tony muttered, giving them an annoyed look.
"Speaking of." Chickbay leaned over Kate, and, winking, said, "Time for NCIS to stop lying down on the job."
Kate opened one eye and looked up, grinning. She caught the proffered hand and let herself be pulled up. She took the towel Mindy offered and wiped the fake blood and hole off her forehead, then extended a hand to Morrow. "Director, ingenious as always."
He chuckled. "Weren't bad yourself, Agent Todd."
"Kate?" Gibbs murmured, almost fearfully, as he reached out a hesitant to touch her. She smiled softly, gently at him. "Kate, I - "
"You shouldn't have come without backup," she chastised gently, her eyes twinkling.
The corners of Gibbs' mouth twitched slightly at the comment, he started to reach out for her. "You're alive."
"Mm hm."
"Aww," Mindy sighed happily. "My inspiration."
Just then Jen Shepard stumbled into the bullpen.
"D-MM-T, THAT'S IT!" Mindy shouted. She glared at Sammie. "You brought Shepard into this story? And right at that critical moment between Kate and Gibbs? Are you TRYING to torture us?"
"We don't need Batt," Nikkinor huffed. "Forget him and his dff screencaptures. Who needs enemies with friends like these?" She slapped Sammie in the head.
"You mean I did ALL THAT for nothing?!" Chickbay exclaimed. "I took a dive for this team! A huge dive! I sacrificed my personal health and wealth and sanity to get us out of that asylum, when apparently I could have just knocked him out. Then you brought dff into the story?!"
"What happened to you?" Sundance sobbed. "What happened to no Jen/Gibbs shipping and 'purification of the Kate-Gibbs ranks'? Have you gone mad?"
DC pulled out her gun.
"Jethro! I came as fast as I could. I was locked into my office! I could swear, this lock," she rambled, holding up the complicated lock. "I've been having trouble with it before, but really, I don't know where it came from. It seems like somebody deliberately jammed the lock from the outside with...a bobby pin? If you look at the scratch pattern along the inside of the lock, you can see it was tamper - "
"What are you, CSI: Home Depot?" Sammie exclaimed, snatching the lock from the redhead and shoving it in her pocket.
Morrow looked from his agent to writer, who gave him a big, innocent smile.
"Nice delaying tactic, MacGyver," DC muttered. "You kept her in there for all of ten seconds."
"Well, it was long enough," Sammie huffed.
"Anyhow, that's all behind us," Jen replied, straightening her skirt as she looked at Gibbs, and, hooking her arm through his, smiled. "I'm here, Jethro."
Gibbs blinked. "Who are you?"
Jen's smile dropped off her face instantly. "What? Jethro - you and me, and Paris, and London, and - "
"Do I know you?" Gibbs asked.
"Jethro! I worked for you! And we - " she gave him a meaningful look.
"Rule no. 12," Gibbs recited, shaking his head as he backed away. "I wouldn't break my own rules."
"THANK YOU," DC exclaimed, throwing up her hands. "WHAT have I been saying for weeks."
"Oh Jethro, how could you forget?" Jen sobbed.
Even ever-kind and tender-hearted Kate was moved and she put her arm around the now ex-director redhead. "It's all right," Kate soothed as she glared at Gibbs, who threw up his hands in frustration. "Gibbs can be a bastard sometimes."
"Does no one believe me?" Gibbs exclaimed.
Jen cried louder. The Magnificent Seven (for you, DC) kick-butt agents looked unsympathetic. Director Morrow looked horrified. The SecNav had replaced him with...this?
DC waved at the red-headed woman. "Now Sammie, get rid of her. PLEASE."
"Well, killing her seems so harsh," Sammie said mournfully.
"Wimp-a-roony," DC muttered.
Sammie stuck her tongue out at DC. "We can give her to Dr. Batt," she suggested. "I feel mean for knocking him out."
"I don't. It's funny," DC replied unsympathetically.
"He was torturing us!" Mindy shouted. "But you might have a point, Sammie."
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All right. Now I really don't have anything more. Mindy, DC's right - you started it, you finish it! :-)
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